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Originally Posted: 2004-02-20 3:19am

A Woman's Poetic Blow Job -- was Re: Pussy poem

And it's a *pantoum*. The only form poem as difficult to write as a sestina.
In case this makes no sense to you, it's in response to a thread:

Man posts badly-written poem about eating pussy; various people argue over whether there is any merit in it; at some point, somebody says, "A woman would never post a poem about sucking cock!"

So here is my poem about sucking cock -- which I really enjoy in the right context. (Please remember to read the footnote.)


On Giving And Taking


To give pleasure is to hold control. My favorite act -
Subversive, perverse, and strangely beautiful. Your moans are
Sharp and silken morsels of delight. I give you
Pleasure, and I take from you control.

Subversive, perverse, and strangely beautiful, your moans are
The sweetest of earthly rewards. I know
pleasure, as I take from you control:
trembling with the force of this desire --

the sweetest of earthly rewards. I know
the moment you slip away and lose your mind,
trembling with the force of this desire,
my velvet tongue upon your barest skin:

The moment you slip away and lose your mind,
and your soul quivers inside your hard cock,
my velvet tongue upon your barest skin;
with soft sounds and slick sweat you belong to me utterly.

And your soul quivers inside your hard cock,
I give you -- another moment -- another --
with soft sounds and slick sweat you belong to me utterly --
the way your breath catches when I lift my head for a moment --

I give you another moment, another,
and my lips move in delicious spirals.
The way your breath catches when I lift my head a moment
erotic -- makes my cunt throb and my back writhe,

and my lips move in delicious spirals,
and I'm all business now, immersing you, working your flesh,
erotic -- makes my cunt throb and my back writhe,
shudder and spasm, electric, nerve impulses --

and I'm all business now, immersing you, working your flesh,
and draw out an animal whimper from your throat, and elicit
shudder and spasm, electric, nerve impulses,
a fierce crescendo and I make you lose yourself,

and draw out an animal whimper from your throat, and elicit
sharp and silken morsels of delight. I give you
a fierce crescendo and I make you lose yourself.
To give pleasure is to hold control. My favorite act.





Disclaimer: There's a 99.9% chance I don't mean YOUR cock. Go away. Don't email me requesting oral sex, dates, or naked pictures UNLESS you are an English major or equivalent in grammatical and poetic prowess. My heart is only accessible through my brain. Show your appreciation by voting best-of.



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